Comments on: My Country (a poem by me) http://jemimah.learnerblogs.org/2006/05/04/my-country-by-me/ Yes, random title, I know Fri, 09 Jan 2009 10:15:26 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=wordpress-mu-1.2.5 By: Jess H http://jemimah.learnerblogs.org/2006/05/04/my-country-by-me/#comment-12 Jess H Thu, 18 May 2006 07:35:22 +0000 http://jemimah.learnerblogs.org/2006/05/04/my-country-by-me/#comment-12 Hey Jemimah, that's a good poem. You have a good rhyming pattern going on there and the different issues you adressed were refreshingly different to everyone else's. Well done. Hey Jemimah, that’s a good poem. You have a good rhyming pattern going on there and the different issues you adressed were refreshingly different to everyone else’s. Well done.

]]> By: Allison http://jemimah.learnerblogs.org/2006/05/04/my-country-by-me/#comment-11 Allison Mon, 08 May 2006 08:59:31 +0000 http://jemimah.learnerblogs.org/2006/05/04/my-country-by-me/#comment-11 Hey I like your poem! And I agree with Bronwyn's comments about your inventive use of the English language - very cleverly written! Although this was a comment about caring for the environment I also detected your disdain for smoking - smart girl!!! Perhaps you could write an anti-smoking poem one day??? Are there any other environmental issues you are passionate about? Hey I like your poem!
And I agree with Bronwyn’s comments about your inventive use of the English language - very cleverly written!
Although this was a comment about caring for the environment I also detected your disdain for smoking - smart girl!!! Perhaps you could write an anti-smoking poem one day???
Are there any other environmental issues you are passionate about?

]]> By: Bronwyn G http://jemimah.learnerblogs.org/2006/05/04/my-country-by-me/#comment-6 Bronwyn G Mon, 08 May 2006 07:47:15 +0000 http://jemimah.learnerblogs.org/2006/05/04/my-country-by-me/#comment-6 I enjoyed the line "Enough exhaust of truck" as you showed you were playful and inventive with the English language as applied to poetry. Thank you for your eloquent plea on behalf of the dugong and seagrass, Jemimah! Your final verse is powerful. Dredging is definitely wrong! How did you get so passionate about it? I enjoyed the line “Enough exhaust of truck” as you showed you were playful and inventive with the English language as applied to poetry.

Thank you for your eloquent plea on behalf of the dugong and seagrass, Jemimah!

Your final verse is powerful.

Dredging is definitely wrong! How did you get so passionate about it?

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